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Hurry
Contributed by
cryingonmyporch
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Sunday, 14th July 2002 @ 03:19:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don't you see you are the rose?
Don’t you see the door close?
I am watching you loose your petals.
I am watching them lock the door.
Don’t you see what is happening?
Don’t you see what they’re destroying?
I see all this clearly. But do you really care.
Please stop listening to their lies.
All they do is make you cry.
They are pushing you to the edge.
They are causing you to be full of rage.
So stop and see you are the rose.
Hurry before the door is closed.
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Re: Hurry
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by princesspurty on
Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 10:16:07 AM AEST
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| this is so sad, but beautifully wrote! |
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Re: Hurry
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by Knowledge on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 01:33:03 PM AEST
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Wow Amy...that is a great one. I liked it a lot. Its so deep. Such a great one from you.
I'm sorry if I ever hurt your feelings. I truly am. I was just being stupid. So very stupid. I don't mind if you don't ever speak to me again, but I am sorry. And thats all I can do, is apologize. All you can do is accept it, whether you like it or not.
-Knowledge |
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Re: Hurry
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by POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 07:46:38 PM AEST
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wow
very pretty
keep them comin!
greatly written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Hurry
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 03:27:52 AM AEST
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| its a really nice poem, sad but nicely written, may sound lame but thanx for writing, |
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