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Into Oblivion
Contributed by
Chicken
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Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 09:30:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I knew it was a one way trip,
But still I had to come.
For I as I watched you standing there
I realized we could never be as one.
I thought you were the one for me.
But you never even knew
The feelings I held deep inside
And the way I felt for you.
So left on the morning train
Before I had time to change my mind.
I thought if I could get away
Somehow peace I would find
Yet now I'm just missing you.
I wish you were here
To take away all my pain
And to dry all my tears.
Copyright ©
Chicken
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2002-09-20 09:30:08]
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Re: Into Oblivion
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by Chrissie on
Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 05:23:08 PM AEST
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A very poignant piece ...I like the length...it carries the emotions well.
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Re: Into Oblivion
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by ginsdance on
Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 01:25:01 PM AEST
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There's always a way back, ya know? And you've got LOTS of friends here that care, me included. So even though this is a great write, and a very poignant piece, you don't have to carry that pain all alone!!!
Ginny |
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