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Broken Road
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:28:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Silence plagues the night.
The road narrow and cold.
The stars come out to view the begining of one mortals end.
Lights bleed their dimness onto the mans back.
He travels toward his last goal.
The only goal in which he will succeed.
Hard water breaks easily.
The silenced night is broken.
Crimson water shows he prevailed.
Lifeless and distorted he floats.
Sirens ring as the lights flash.
Blue and red paint the night.
Out of thought and out of sight.
This mortal had reached his goal.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-03-28 15:28:20]
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Re: Broken Road
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:44:34 PM AEST
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| well written, great images, beautiful in its sad fare thee well....... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Broken Road
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:59:37 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this poem it is sad in its own right but it is bueatifly written |
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Re: Broken Road
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 09:27:04 PM AEST
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very sad but very well written...very beautiful
you have that magical talent in writing....
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Broken Road
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:31:19 PM AEST
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that was a wonderful write. sad, but well said. everyone feels that way every so often. me especially. dont feel so alone ;). ever need anyone to talk to Im always here.
Lindsey |
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Re: Broken Road
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 05:11:56 PM AEST
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Yo Jayster, its good, i like it, you got talent man, just like all the other posts, Its sad......Greatly writin.....haha, thanks for actually telling me what it ment....
p.s. Hope you do good in the finals
Yo Dawg,
Tyler
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