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Betrayal

Contributed by MrWrite on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:18:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Tossing and turning, alone at night.
Trying to sleep with all of my might.
Thinking back to a better time,
When your destiny was entwined with mine.
When we were together, I thought my life was grand,
But it slipped through my fingers, like a grain of sand.
I thought I knew you. I thought you cared.
But I was wrong. The feelings you shared
Were nothing but fantasy, with no substance at all.
I thought you loved me, but I took the fall
For loving you with all of my heart.
I felt the pangs, and you played the part
Flawlessly. You made me believe
That you loved me, and now I grieve
Over love found and lost, and now I find
That it was all fake. It was all in my mind.
You used me like a rag, and you threw me away
Like some piece of trash, like the fad of the day.
But don't get me wrong. I don't hate you.
Really, I don't....I despise you.
The very fact that you could use me like that,
It's just pathetic. You acted like a brat.
But that's alright, it doesn't matter anymore.
I found you out, and I showed you the door.
I've gotten over you, and that's the bottom line.
I don't want to be in your life, so get out of mine.

Copyright © MrWrite ... [ 2004-03-28 15:18:46]
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Re: Betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:10:54 PM AEST
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Excellent.. very well writin .. and a beautiful flowing poem.. i really enjoyed it .. but in some sense i dont find it that dark.. but it was wonderful..
luck to you
~neglected1~

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