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Love (A perlude to our Eulogy)
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:07:37 PM in AEST
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Keeping secrets locked inside a fragile mind.
We try to escape our crashing fate.
I loved, we died, I tryed.
Fights and bitterness seemed to be all you wanted.
I wanted more.
You only built me up to send me crashing down.
Controlling and scrolling with every click.
We needed to talk.
But we only heard your side didnt we.
No time, no space, all we did was leave this place.
You kept in mind all the wrong I have done.
You judged me without judging yourself.
We know you never did any wrong.
Its over now.
I said too much and did to little.
I feel that im gaffer taped in the middle.
My translucent flesh.
Your feeble bones.
We could never be one.
So why does any of it matter.
Because in the end everything we done is everything we arent.
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Mortis-Dark
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2004-03-28 15:07:37]
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Re: Love (A perlude to our Eulogy)
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by MrWrite on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:19:40 PM AEST
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| This was quite well written. I felt that you conveyed your emotions well. Good job, my friend. |
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Re: Love (A perlude to our Eulogy)
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:25:23 PM AEST
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LOVE is a double sided knife... either way you're screwed. Very well written mortis...expressed these emotions beautifully.
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