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The chosen one
Contributed by
whocares
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:59:16 PM in AEST
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Twice reborn and trice to death
A thousand times our feeble death
To heal the hurt and seal the wounds
To recall the fallen from their tomb.
Twice the bearer, once the borne
A tear to shed and love to mourn
A thousand swords the battle takes
Until the time the sword doth break.
Arising from the battle heat
He shall lead forward all our feet
Beneath his banner in the sky
Many men shall fight and die
And with the sinking of the sun
The swords are stilled, the battle won
His power spent, he lies alone
The lighted come to guide him home.
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Re: The chosen one
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:02:50 PM AEST
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Reminds me of LordofTheRings
Another good write
Especially liked that last line "The lighted come to guide him home" |
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Re: The chosen one
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by CodyJ on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:04:58 PM AEST
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| tres bien |
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Re: The chosen one
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:11:07 PM AEST
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Solid, flowing rhyme.
Is this themed on a particular person of lore? I didn't quite catch who it was, but this was an atmospheric piece nontheless.
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Re: The chosen one
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:12:44 PM AEST
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| Well done, i like that style very much. |
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Re: The chosen one
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:31:30 PM AEST
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| Omg!! Bella, I loved this one!! Though, I can never imagine u writing this piece (lol) I'm sooo impressed. Wow, ur really talented!! I'm going to print it, hehe. ^_^ |
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