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The Never ending Sidewalk
Contributed by
jamsters
on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:45:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm walking down
this never ending
sidewalk
Thinking about
you
The more I
think about it,
the more i hate you
You called yourself
a friend
to me you are
a that
betrays
Oh yea,
that takes your
boyfriends too
You are at the
end of this
never ending sidewalk
But when i come to
the end
It will also
be the end of
you
Copyright ©
jamsters
... [
2004-03-28 14:45:21]
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Re: The Never ending Sidewalk
(User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:56:38 PM AEST
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I just had a friend betryal I know what you mean in this poem! Very well expressed and it don't suck! Great write!
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Re: The Never ending Sidewalk
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 09:45:03 PM AEST
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This Doesn't Suck At All..
Actually Its A Wonderful Write,
Hang In There...
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: The Never ending Sidewalk
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by monkey on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:12:32 PM AEST
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James-
I have a strange feeling this is about Brandy. Correct me if Im wrong but thats what I thought. Anyways! I liked it. It reminded me of my hatred towards Rachel!
Monkey |
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