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Everlasting
Contributed by
coaster
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:27:26 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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Gliding through the air with the stars that are above
The beauty in your skies will fly like a dove
When the never-ending horizon in the sky turns blue
The division of nights won't interfere with me and you
Even if the clouds in our air will seem to be complete
In those clouds of happiness our stability will meet
Through the love that we have the hate will release
And the wars in our heads will always end in peace
With every wind that will seem to sail away
I'll always be happy knowing our love will stay...
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2004-03-28 14:27:26]
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Re: Everlasting
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:54:53 PM AEST
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Wow short sweet and romantic! Filled with wonderful imagery! loved it!!
Anne :D |
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Re: Everlasting
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:18:13 AM AEST
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| Very romantic and dreamy indeed and the imagery is beautiful. I loved this poem, thanks for posting it up. |
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Re: Everlasting
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:56:36 AM AEST
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WoW Very Romantic
Loved It...Great Write....
,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Everlasting
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:56:12 PM AEST
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short, sweet, romantic honey you've got it right. carry on writing!
hugs
XgenX |
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