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The Broken monster.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:43:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Dark shadows drape from,
my head and down me,
curly me down,
until i can't see.
it drowns me to nothing,
and swirls with red anger,
as i bleed from my rists,
still clutching my grey dagger.
my make-up smudged,
and flowing in black rivers down my face,
i fall through the earth,
seeing flash-backs of lifes taste.
i loose control,
as my bitter cruel mind,
explodes shedding more fear,
that shoots though my time.
until i wake,
from my twisted thoughts,
i rise and run,
swolen and distraught.
my black cloths,
fall back into the night,
bringing me too,
forcing on, another...
blood sucking bite!
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deathdrop
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2004-03-28 13:43:48]
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Re: The Broken monster.
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by shelby on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:52:01 PM AEST
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gripping write
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Re: The Broken monster.
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:18:00 PM AEST
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Wow I enjoyed reading this poem! Darkly enchanting ;) Great write!!!
Anne :D |
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Re: The Broken monster.
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by Mortis-Dark on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:11:14 PM AEST
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Spine tingling chilling. awesome write ;)
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Re: The Broken monster.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:59:48 AM AEST
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| There's nothing cool or deep about slitting your wrists, suicide or being a psycho. I think you're a bit immature and I hope you grow up. |
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