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Untill I Saw You
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:11:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I tried to catch your attention
Went to the places I knew you would be at
Found out you were aware of my intention
Now I long to live again the day we met
You layed you eyes on me and smiled
In an instant my heart was set
I was under an impression
That my life was full
Untill I saw you
And nothing seems to interest you
How can fate be so cruel
You gave me what I came for
A chance at your unlasting love
It wasn't like I didn't know about it before
I ignored it with my head up in the sky above
I wish I could make you change
Cause you are all I have
I was under an impression
That my life was full
Untill I saw you
And nothing seems to interest you
How can fate be so cruel
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2004-03-28 13:11:04]
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Re: Untill I Saw You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:29:46 PM AEST
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Reality can be a cruel thing |
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Re: Untill I Saw You
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by shelby on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:43:39 PM AEST
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emotional write enjoyable to read yes at times reality can be so very harsh
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Re: Untill I Saw You
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 09:56:44 PM AEST
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Nicely Written And I'll Have To Agree With
Michelle And Plain Reality Can Be Very
Harsh And Cruel Sometimes...
,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,
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