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Lovely Bride
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:59:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Lovely bride
Dressed in black
Her torn and frailed dress
Laps up the fiery coals
Boquet of wilting roses
In her bony hands
Make up smudged
From a million tears cried
And a kiss that never met lips
Walking up the aisle
To a groom
That will never be there
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2004-03-28 12:59:25]
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Re: Lovely Bride
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:52:36 PM AEST
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The best gear comes in small boxes,
I like that about this,
I also like your vivid expressions. |
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Re: Lovely Bride
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by gothicangel on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:19:19 PM AEST
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| Hmm, sad.. If It is about you.. I am sure you will find someone=) |
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Re: Lovely Bride
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:57:29 PM AEST
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| I think your poem is beautiful, it doesn't rhyme so it's very tolerable 'cause I can't stand poems that rhyme all the time, they're just annoying and shallow. The Lovely Bride isn't alone, I also have never kissed a man. |
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Re: Lovely Bride
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 09:41:55 AM AEST
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| awww, this is so sad. i hope she finds her groom someday...very good write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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