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Demons within Us
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:34:26 PM in AEST
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My thoughts do always haunt me because theyre filled with pain
My vision often taunts me by showing me no gain
The voices are uncertain, they're playing games with me
Afraid to sleep at night? Yes, you're talking about me
Everyday day is but struggle
With what? For its unseen
Theres certain things around us
Yes I know that sounds obseen
The demons bring us pleasure then throw us on our face
The angels come to carry us to another place
Dont ask me how I know this
Dont ask me what I see
For everythings uncertain
and it don't depend on me
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-03-28 12:34:26]
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Re: Demons within Us
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:15:10 PM AEST
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| very darkly written. this is really good. i feel where you are on the last 4 lines of this. it's weird, because it crosses over with me. |
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Re: Demons within Us
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:30:44 PM AEST
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| i agree....very dark and gives an ominous feeling |
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Re: Demons within Us
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:47:26 AM AEST
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INTRESTING & TRUE! YOU KNOW WHY BUT NOT HOW!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
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Re: Demons within Us
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:05:23 AM AEST
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Maybe it does sound crazy... but that's OK. Poets are supposed to be slightly insane. And, hey, what would the world be wthout wierd people?
Well written. I don't know if I got the whole thing, but I like it.
Take care.
David |
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