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Die Young Beauty
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 09:05:41 AM in AEST
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Die young beauty
Sat in front of the mirror
It will never crack like mine
Into millions of pieces
Scarring my skin
Just like it always was
But i'm not jealous
Just ignore my eys so green
Oh how i try to be beautiful
To be pretty
To be lovely like you
With my features cut
From darling razors
No make up can cover me up
No make up can make me beautiful
Make me pretty
Make me lovely like you
Oh what a waste of make up today
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Re: Die Young Beauty
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 09:18:49 AM AEST
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*CRIESsss* I'm getting depressed hearing all these people saying their ugly. If you were able to write this poem than you are most beautiful looks unfortunately matter in this damned world *burn all those magazines!!* but you must not let this stupid friggin mentalilty ruin your life! To hell with aestetics! Great write bdw (sorry for being angry)
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Re: Die Young Beauty
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by Avis_Nigra on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:07:05 AM AEST
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| I somewhat join Necromant's sight. Beauty is there to be found in every one in it's own way. Do not believe when they try to put their values in your head. Love yourself then others can love you. What else do we need? |
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Re: Die Young Beauty
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by boricuacd on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:19:44 AM AEST
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