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I'm a creep
Contributed by
gothicangel
on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 08:07:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Beating drums in deepest dark
Syncopated heart
Start the torture at my mark
rip my soul apart
Haunt my mind,
just don't be kind.
Screaming echoes through the night
Let the demons rape
Cut my eyes to steal my sight
Nowhere to escape
Make me cry,
and want to die
Burning fire getting near
Let the pain begin
Let me choke in my own fear
Remind me of my sin
Crush my head,
I'm almost dead
Laughing phantoms having fun,
knowing they'll succeed
Punish me for what I've done,
leave me here to bleed
I'm a creep,
now let me sleep
Copyright ©
gothicangel
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2004-03-28 08:07:50]
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Re: I'm a creep
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 08:24:56 AM AEST
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Whoa what a tormented poem! Wow the imagery is really dark! I loved the way you wrote it. Just I hope you don't believe it you're not a creep! Amazing poem, really talented!
Anne :D |
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Re: I'm a creep
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by MyLastBreath on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:08:48 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading that. I like your writing style! Wonderful! |
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Re: I'm a creep
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by arden on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:10:34 PM AEST
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oh wow. now this was some dark stuff lol i loved this is was just so awesome! well written. i hope you dont think your a creep.
keep up the good work.
Arden |
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Re: I'm a creep
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by JennyFruFru on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:11:23 PM AEST
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| The words let you envision the terror and things that haunt this person... nice job |
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Re: I'm a creep
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by boricuacd on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:17:40 AM AEST
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| WoW! nice! |
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