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Lie
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:53:49 AM in AEST
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With all these moments traceless
and my face becoming faceless
you wonder if I'm real or if this saddness is just baseless.
I'll stay a lttle longer
won't leave until I'm stonger
every word you say became a lie.
Curl into a ball wait until I die.
And the truthful lie?
I hold the proof,
all lies are built upon some truth.
Copyright ©
broken-glass
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2004-03-28 06:53:49]
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Re: Lie
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by gothicangel on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 07:09:30 AM AEST
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Yeah, you are so right!
I liked this poem! =) |
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Re: Lie
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 01:30:37 PM AEST
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this is so true. its so deep in such a small poem. your work rocks!!! keep it up
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Re: Lie
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 04:24:11 PM AEST
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