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a fine young man
Contributed by
jaeann
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:36:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
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a fine young man he was, yes....he was
popped into this world in a rush
stayed by her for his just because
and learned the right times to hush
adapted his life to two crazy kids
lost in their world of pain
brought smiles to her often when he hid
and kept them all this side of sane
given the gift of walking
to him as she quietly passed on
she never heard of him talking
no memories for him to carry along
now so many troubled miles
between us have grown so tall
missing all your hidden smiles
and always dreading the coming fall
losing out on all these years
is a pain that ceases to desist
knowing you are my hidden tears
make the fears insist
hearing your voice can ease the hurt
and was enough to last awhile
so grown up and no longer curt
you brought back a mama's smile
you'll be fine with the wisdom i gave you
and she's guiding you all the way
the talisman will encase you too
with energy from her brief stay
a fine young man he was, yes.....he is
raised him with a woman's heart
confident and solid the world is his
for he needed to have a brand new start
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2004-03-28 06:36:42]
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Re: a fine young man
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by gothicangel on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 07:07:33 AM AEST
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Oh, nice poem! this was great!
gl=)
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Re: a fine young man
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 08:27:24 AM AEST
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Wow very well written poem! A fine young man indeed. Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: a fine young man
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:26:29 AM AEST
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| they grow up and have a part of us inside them no matter where they go, beautiful caring poem written by a loving mom, jaeann, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: a fine young man
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:02:37 PM AEST
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Just beautiful..so well said, yet I feel such sadness in this. ((jaeann))
Very well done
Roses
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Re: a fine young man
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:45:12 PM AEST
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Oh Jaymee, This poem is so special.....from one Mother to another.....I can feel your grief, and I do know how hard it is to let go. But look at this way......was he ever really yours?
They are just on lease.......to borrow........
Bless your heart for writing such a loving, caring poem from the depths of your heart!
You'll see.......you two will never part......he'll be back one day.....just for a peek see?
Loveyou
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