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i need finality
Contributed by
ur_in_my_light
on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:14:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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ever feel like your ignored?
to everyone your just abhorred?
eveyrone plays head games
and they've given you the blame.
ever want to laugh out?
ever need to cry out?
is your soul filled with doubt?
with nothingness?
with emptiness?
which your actions,
they have no consequence?
just that you can't live with out?
oh, i'm not cool,
i'm just a fool,
just another dork that drools.
i need closure, i need finality,
one way to solve that is fatality.
im feeling contorted.
im feeling twisted.
you're all falling away,
you're getting more distant.
i need closure,
i need finality,
i'm stuck in life's box.
can't get out of my cell block.
my life isn't real.
it's just xeroxed.
i'm the worst as can ever be,
i cant fix the problem
you fix it,
get of rid me .,
and end me with finality.
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ur_in_my_light
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Re: i need finality
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:22:07 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC...this was so sad but written with so much feelings.... If this is truly how you feel, I hope things improve for you soon...
Jenni |
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Re: i need finality
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:29:49 AM AEST
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| wonderful expression of feelings, warm welcome to ypdc, keep writing! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: i need finality
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by pinkashes on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:40:39 AM AEST
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| it's good, i can tell you were just writing with your heart. keep doing it, keep on going. |
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Re: i need finality
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:31:45 AM AEST
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Very good writing! I think u found your nick.
Take it easy on yourself, please?
I'm sure there's much good in u.
Keep it up, ( the writing).
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: i need finality
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by Avis_Nigra on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:07:45 AM AEST
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| Very impressive. It will be alright some day. |
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Re: i need finality
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:12:45 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC... If this is rue u can overcome ur feelings in time... don't be hard on urself... I know I've been there and done that and am probably still doing it lol! U have definitely found ur niche in life keep writing... hope to hear more from u...
~Donna~ |
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