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Chains of Hell
Contributed by
essentially9
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 11:58:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Chains of Hell
Full throttle till we reached the line
Crossing the fine line leads us
To the limits overtaken
Everything seen flashes away
We crossed over to the other side
Nothing went up without coming down
Heaven is sure to come down
And the only place for Hell to go is up
Sooner I'll reach up and kiss the sky
Then I will lose my chains
The chains are bonding me to myself
That's a worse torture than Hell itself
Hell is a state of mind
Heaven is nonexistant to me
I know this
I know that the world spins
The day that it stops is the day
That Heaven will fall into Hell's grace
Crossing the line onto the other side
It's the first time at a real life
The after life is the line
That keeps getting pushed back
Nothing gives you freedom
Everything gives you chains
Wish I knew this sooner
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2004-03-27 23:58:07]
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Re: Chains of Hell
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:34:17 AM AEST
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| Oooooo! This was chilling and deep! I loved it. So sadly true... I hope you feel better soon. I look forward to reading more of your poetry! |
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Re: Chains of Hell
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:04:56 PM AEST
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I really liked finding this one..It had me stop definitly and keep reading..Such great way you describe these visions..Talent talent and then there is You who has much more then I could begin to comment on..
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