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LIFE IS LIKE THAT OF A LEAF
Contributed by
rhei76
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:41:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Life is like that of a leaf
Floating down seperated from mother
All is amid
Upon the decent
And as it lands it grows feet
And learns how to breed
It says how pretty it is without the fright
how soothing this place maybe
without that anger
I was afraid in the long decent
But now I'm okay with death
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2004-03-27 22:41:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: LIFE IS LIKE THAT OF A LEAF
(User Rating: 1 ) by Claire on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 11:10:02 PM AEST (User
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That's quite the conclusion to reach, I'll admit I was surprised: i didnt know where you were going with that. Good, though. You should read *****'s "a leaf falls". It is amazing. |
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Re: LIFE IS LIKE THAT OF A LEAF
(User Rating: 1 ) by Justalady on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:30:55 AM AEST (User
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Insight abounds here in this captivating poem. As one who also sees nature intermingling with human life I apprieciate this very much. A sensitivity that not all people have. Thank you. June |
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