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Heart-Broken And Lost
Contributed by
MyLastBreath
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:03:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Depleted eyes are tired of crying
Bleeding lips are tired of screaming your name
Heart broken and lost
Unloved and empty
How can you watch as my world just falls apart
You caught the pieces
But won't put them back together
My happiness and will to live
Lies in your hands
The soft, beautiful hands
That used to hold me
So close to your heart
Now they're cold, empty and bleeding
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MyLastBreath
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2004-03-27 21:03:10]
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Re: Heart-Broken And Lost
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:21:28 PM AEST
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| Gotta love all that angst, aye? I loved the dark, fallen angel type of atmosphere you painted here. Well done. |
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Re: Heart-Broken And Lost
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by Claire on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 11:15:26 PM AEST
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| That poem made me feel sad for you. That was a simple statement that didn't come near describing what I mean, but I hope that you understand that because of that poem I feel sad for you. I would tell you "It will be ok" but I'm not sure that you'd believe me. But it is true. |
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Re: Heart-Broken And Lost
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by JennyFruFru on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:04:19 AM AEST
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"How can you watch as my world just falls apart
You caught the pieces
But won't put them back together
My happiness and will to live
Lies in your hands"
That is absolutely wonderful the way you paint a picture of the pain one person can cause you is amazing. Im envious.
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Re: Heart-Broken And Lost
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:01:31 PM AEST
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| excellent, a captivating poem, hugs n' love nessa |
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