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Silenced blind Girl
Contributed by
kittiekat
on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 08:41:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Muted.
Utterly lost and confused
She feels everything surrounded by her
Like an open casket with no air
Darkness follows her for what seems like
Eternity
The wet tears depressed against the black room, screams of silence
Nothing to see, nothing to lose
Eyes of angels withered
A frown to despair but not known
Drowned alone by the black horizon
The warm touch feeling for once then
Lost in an instance
A hose flowing again to gain fear
No voices limited in the thick space
This cursed soul is deadly with a smile
Laughs of memories but yet again
The facet turns and she drowns in it
With nothing to see, nothing to love
Copyright ©
kittiekat
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2004-03-27 20:41:08]
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Re: Silenced blind Girl
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by MyLastBreath on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:07:27 PM AEST
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Beautiful! I really liked the 'Eyes of Angels withered'
Keep Writing!!! |
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Re: Silenced blind Girl
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by MyLastBreath on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:07:39 PM AEST
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Beautiful! I really liked the 'Eyes of Angels withered'
Keep Writing!!! |
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Re: Silenced blind Girl
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by Claire on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 11:24:36 PM AEST
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| I'm wondering if it was school that made you feel like that- I wouldn't be surprised, it happens to me sometimes. I really enjoyed this poem. |
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