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Before Depression Sets In
Contributed by
fldadn1
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:29:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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All alone
Having to settle in
All alone
Talking to shadows again
All alone
I don't know where to go
All alone
The times going extremely slow
All alone
It's too quiet for me to think
All alone
Hearing drips from the kitchen sink
I've been through all this before
Yet I still don't know what to do
I don't want me have me here no more
I want someone else to come through
All alone
I wonder if I'll be saved
All alone
I doubt it, maybe another day
All alone
At least it's not dark in here
All alone
Being alone in the dark is my fear
All alone
When I talk to the walls
All alone
I never get a response
I don't know what else to say
I don't know what else to think
I will just wait for tomarrow, today
If I don't get too weak.
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Re: Before Depression Sets In
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by JennyFruFru on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:44:25 PM AEST
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| Stay strong..... your never alone......and when you think you are just remember that sometimes the people you think dont care are probably the ones that care the most. Beautifully done :) |
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Re: Before Depression Sets In
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by Claire on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 11:29:43 PM AEST
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| Repetition really worked in this poem, I loved it. I liked "I will just wait for tomorrow, today." I've felt that way a lot. I already recommended this to one person today, but you should read *****s' "A leaf falls" and then, on an unrelated note, you should know that you are never alone. Somebody cares about you. |
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Re: Before Depression Sets In
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:59:09 PM AEST
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| all alone... mmm the words bring me truth... |
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