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Glorifying
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:20:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The blood cascades to my temple. Light fades to darkness. A morbide being lays shaplessly on the hollow ground. With each beat of my pacing heart I try to skip a beat. The smell of the ocean rolls in after the mornings dew. Reaching spirtual ectasy, we return later to this date in time. Only to see what things we have lost while glorifying others.
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Re: Glorifying
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:51:09 PM AEST
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| Your poetry is yours...but I somehow got an uplifting feeling from this not of dark, a bit dismal but still uplifting...but regardless a very fever pitched kind of work...quite nice actually. |
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Re: Glorifying
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:21:44 PM AEST
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Dark yes, but that makes for some of the best poetry. :) great job here, with the visual imagry and the style. i really enjoyed this read.
Lindsey |
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