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Untitled
Contributed by
little_genna
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:56:34 PM in AEST
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You hide behind such a child,
Your posterior will be broken.
Never to make it in this cruel world!
Don’t you see you’re not funny anymore?
Just grow up,
And let's face it not everyone can pull it off,
Looking like a dog!
You may seem sweet and friendly,
But your such a ,
You give us females a bad,
Reputation!
I’m not being mean,
Just saying what I feel must be said.
Maybe you will realize your errors,
In life!
Who am I kidding?
You’re just a naive fool!
Copyright ©
little_genna
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2004-03-27 16:56:34]
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Re: Untitled
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:01:40 PM AEST
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Ugh I dunno how to comment and not hurt someones feelings lets just say very original poem tee hee and the messege is really clear. I don't know if I read the poem you mentioned i'll take a look at it.
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Re: Untitled
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by Soulless on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:52:25 PM AEST
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I can see why you hadnt named the poem. I have a few suggestions but Im not really sure.
Wonderful poem though,
It seems to hold much anger in such slender words.
Kisses,
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Re: Untitled
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:57:08 PM AEST
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if you lovely people have suggestions for the name of this poem feel free to tell me. i am completely open to your views. this does have alot of anger in it, but its just me letting off steam after having to put up with her for the last two years.
thanks much for all your comments.
XgenX |
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