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frozen tremble
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:55:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My face aches at the thought of tears
the lonliness that is seeping through
My body takes over with a fear
That feels so intense it burns
My insides feel like frozen lakes
Anytime they may crumble at my feet
the pressure of the world is too much
For a single set of shoulders to bear
Walking the streets time and time again
Singly with noone there to hold me
Makes my soul tremble knowing
That the one guy i once loved i have now lost
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2004-03-27 16:55:23]
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Re: frozen tremble
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:59:33 PM AEST
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So sad!! Wonderfully written filled with vivid imagery! Great write!
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Re: frozen tremble
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 10:09:10 AM AEST
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My insides feel like frozen lakes
Anytime they may crumble at my feet
the pressure of the world is too much
For a single set of shoulders to bear
i loved the imagery here excellent write.
wildejohnny. |
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