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Grave Decisions
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:09:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I lay here sleeping, hoping you will pass on by;
No need to stop here, no need to sit and cry.
I died, left this world, to escape inhumanity,
I am in eternal oblivion, free of insanity.
I did not want to live anymore, and now I am dead
And don’t lay down your flowers on my earthen bed;
They are too pretty, too pretty for me-
For I lie here decaying; I am no longer to be.
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afraid_of_fear
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2004-03-27 16:09:13]
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Re: Grave Decisions
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:33:24 PM AEST
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Whoa! What a deep dark poem! Really sad and bitter. I loved your style very expressive!
Anne :D |
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Re: Grave Decisions
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by arden on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:30:55 PM AEST
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very dark and sad. i love how it all flows together so beautifully. awesome job. another great write by a awesome poet.
your friend,
Becky |
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Re: Grave Decisions
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:57:26 PM AEST
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| well done..... very solemn...... hugs n' love nessa |
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