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You Say, I Say
Contributed by
SuicidalPoet
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:20:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You say what a great world
I say why is it so cruel
You say what a great life
I say where's the knife
You smile with joy
I cry in pain
You say you love me
I say no one does
You say god will help
I say he hasn't yet
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Re: You Say, I Say
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by Claire on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 11:53:32 PM AEST
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| I always wonder wheter it's ethical for me to call poems like this one "good," because, as in this one, they seem so sad and desperate. Yet it's really good writing. I'm befuddled. |
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Re: You Say, I Say
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by LouisaMontagu on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:37:14 PM AEST
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Hmmmmm, read my one did we..?
glad i inspired you. |
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