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Weary
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:02:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I see the scattered lines. I cast out my cry for help. Only to hear the echo return from these torn walls. At last I seek what to which I cam here for. Only to find nothing to feel this void inside of me. Growing weary of life, I take a step. My first step. The first step, to leave this weary life.
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Re: Weary
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:19:48 PM AEST
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I liked this one, written with pain and bitterness. Keep strong great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Weary
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by Soulless on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:15:47 PM AEST
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Exellent write, I loved the discriptions, they seemed to come alive in my head,
Wonderful,
kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Weary
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:18:21 PM AEST
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inspirational write. i hope you get past all your demons (or maybe not sicne they help you to write such beauitful stuff). thank you for sharing
Lindsey |
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