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shame
Contributed by
angrycheerios
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:11:37 PM in AEST
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i stopped writing cause i couldnt find a ryhme
couldnt find a line to sum up what i felt
or a line to get me high
thats how i once dealt
with the shame of my shame causing more shame
im shameful of my shamefullness
shame is felt in my kiss
but i kiss shamelessly
aimlessly
a mark i never miss
when i kiss i kiss to kill
i never miss
i never will
if u doubt me then u wont be kissed
youll never see
the shame in me
youll never be near me
i can see that u hear me
but you see that i am
messy
still with your eyes you will
undress me
and this will cause me shame
its a neverending game
my limbs grow lame
ive gone insane
from the pain of shame
causing only more shame
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Re: shame
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by neglected1 on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:05:07 PM AEST
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It's hard surrounding yourself with shame and comes from unnecessary being. .. your thoughts have created this poem very well.. beautifully done.. luck to you
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Re: shame
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by dAWn on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:36:39 PM AEST
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two thumbsup for this one
true, shame causes even more shame... |
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Re: shame
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:39:11 PM AEST
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| I really do love this poem |
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Re: shame
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by silent on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 08:03:58 PM AEST
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| Very well done :) |
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Re: shame
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by Claire on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 11:00:35 PM AEST
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| mmmm... i liked this very much. i'm curious: did you spend a lot of time crafting it, or did it just pour out? Either way, it is quite the creation. |
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Re: shame
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:05:34 AM AEST
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| I hear the words in this poem LOUD AND CLEAR!! Excellent! |
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