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Only Memories Left
Contributed by
sunshinegirl
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Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 06:06:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I sat and watched you next to me
And thought about how close we’ve become
All the memories we’ve shared
All the memories I thought would come
You grew to become a part of me
You hold a place within my heart
We always were together
Hoping to never be apart
I know we had our hard times
And that I always made mistakes
But you were still standing beside me
Sticking through every problem I’d create
You know I truly didn’t mean it
All the mean things I seemed to do
I didn’t know why you stayed with me
Because it just ended up hurting you
Our friendship had grown so much
More than anyone ever knew
Problems come and problems go
But I always thought it would still be me and you
Now you’re gone
There’s not much left for me to do
But sit here and hope
That you think of me too
I wish you could forgive me
And realized I messed up again
I now realized that I hurt you too many times
And because of that I lost you…. my best friend.
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sunshinegirl
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2002-09-20 06:06:11]
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Re: Only Memories Left
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by MisterRight on
Sunday, 22nd September 2002 @ 02:47:54 PM AEST
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I stayed with you because I love you and I'm still with you even now that I'm gone and I'll be with you always. And I forgave you a long time ago.
I love you
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Re: Only Memories Left
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 03:21:39 PM AEST
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Now you’re gone
There’s not much left for me to do
But sit here and hope
That you think of me too
Sure there is...read the comment I put on your other poem :) |
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Re: Only Memories Left
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 12:58:36 PM AEST
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You haven't lost him girl!!! I've read all of your poems on here... starting with the newest and working my way down... and it seems to me that you know that you love each other, but something is still holding you back from picking up the phone. Just look inside yourself, identify it, and everything will be fine. I have a feeling that he'd like to be with you too. You're a very talented writer... and you'll get through this!
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Re: Only Memories Left
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by sunshinegirl on
Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 06:27:40 AM AEST
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Thanks for all your comments. You really have a way with words. You are very talented and I appreciate all the advice you have given! Your poems are very heartfelt and beautiful so keep writing!
I know everything will work out in the end....it just has to be the right time!! :) |
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Re: Only Memories Left
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by fancyface4898 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:58:41 AM AEST
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| memories can be good and bad but that is what makes up life and you did a good job writing about that Keep up the good work |
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