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Just a Memory
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:40:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I remember how it used to be
All that I dreamed of
And it seemed I got it all for free
But now it's just a memory
How good it felt when you I found
After searching for so long
Now it is over, you're not around
And I sit still, without a sound
I'm trying to think of our past
It was so perfect
But things so perfect, they never last
Maybe it's all just a test
You had my love and all my trust
How did it end
With all my hopes turning to dust
Leaving my heart and dreams so fast
I must forget what happened then
But I should remember
All the reasons why it began
For no matter how hard it gets,
I will always stand
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New_York_Chick
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2004-03-27 12:40:31]
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Re: Just a Memory
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:34:14 PM AEST
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| awww, yes it hurts when a love ends, i hope your heart feels better soon, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Just a Memory
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by luckycharm on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:36:33 PM AEST
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| You have done well in this poem. I really like your poetry. Your friend.-luckycharm. |
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Re: Just a Memory
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by dAWn on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:39:00 PM AEST
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| griefly but positive that's how I would call this... |
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Re: Just a Memory
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:15:13 AM AEST
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Gritty and emotive.
I like. |
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