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Someone's Illusion
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:32:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Slowly my life is turned upside down, it seems days go by without a sound,
One by one they merge into one, spinning so fast my future becomes my past,
Could I ever catch up, slow down I've had enough,
It's like today is really tomorrow and tomorrow was really last night,
One thing I know for sure and that's we never make it out of life alive,
I wish I could step back out of my life, watch my existence, thus finding out if my decisions were right,
We never know what the future may hold,
We only know of our past, and we always wonder if our mistakes will catch us at last,
Are we really alive, or are we fragments of someone else's mind,
Questions go unanswered, thoughts are manipulated like cancer,
The older we get, the harder it is to resist,
Asking yourself whether this world can be helped,
Everyday people die, everyday some child cries,
It seems as if the world will 'impload',
Next thing you know some doctor states, I found a cure for some deadly virus, and again our hopes grow,
It's like I'm playing hide and go seek, in some sick twisted person's dream,
Being chased by a demon, waking up in my bed screaming,
The sun comes up, the sun goes down,
Here I stand in the middle of the ocean staring at a concert ground,
Does that make any sense, I'm about to rip through this fence,
It's all mass cunfusion, and we are only someone's illusion.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2004-03-27 12:32:43]
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Re: Someone's Illusion
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:00:08 PM AEST
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wow matt, this has a deeply powerful message in it, this is a truely beautiful poem, with many fine points to ponder:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Someone's Illusion
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:09:03 PM AEST
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Great to see you posting again, Matt...Have missed you and your poems.. Hope all is well with you and yours...
Hugs
Jenni
BTW, Good write....
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Re: Someone's Illusion
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:20:49 PM AEST
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| We never make it out of life alive- Guns and Roses- Civil war- a small borrow- but I liked the overall poem |
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Re: Someone's Illusion
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:23:16 PM AEST
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What a marvellious poem! Filled with vivid imagery. You really described life masterly! Awesome!!! Great!! Brilliant!!! ....
Anne :D |
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Re: Someone's Illusion
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by youlied on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:52:29 PM AEST
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| This really makes me think....I like it, Good work! |
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Re: Someone's Illusion
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 05:47:53 PM AEST
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wow.. this is incredible..
charlotte x_x_x |
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