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Softly Spoken, Like A Whisper
Contributed by
Justalady
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:25:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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Softly spoken, a catch in a voice from afar,
that finds the listening ear, exactly where you are.
A whisper at times, that barely can be heard
finding it's own way, creeping deeper inward.
The breath felt, as it settles on your cheek
as it travels over miles, you know it's yours to keep.
It's warm, you swear...so close that you can feel
some magical inner sense, making it feel real.
Words shared, thoughts that may at times over power,
as love and dreams, bring you closer to tomorrow.
Time, distance....has been erased, you are both in one place,
that softly spoken voice, almost brings you face to face.
A moment, an hour...there is no concept of time
as you listen to your hearts, feel emotions climb,
reaching the tallest peak as actual words you now hear,
softly spoken like a whisper..."Yes, I love you dear.
Author: June E. Miller (Justalady)
2/21/2003
Copyright ©
Justalady
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2004-03-27 09:25:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Softly Spoken, Like A Whisper
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:30:23 AM AEST (User
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Ahh...that was breathtaking. Makes me want to be in love myself :) Well done. |
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Re: Softly Spoken, Like A Whisper
(User Rating: 1 ) by rie on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:44:45 AM AEST (User
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so lovely,
i wish i could have written it for someone.
just beautiful
well done |
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Re: Softly Spoken, Like A Whisper
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:53:39 AM AEST (User
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ohh this is all so true, loving words over the net reach in ones soul, and hearts can bleed tears just as real...... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Softly Spoken, Like A Whisper
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:08:23 PM AEST (User
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June this is absolutely beautiful
michelle |
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Re: Softly Spoken, Like A Whisper
(User Rating: 1 ) by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:29:30 PM AEST (User
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i dont think it could have been said better. :) amazing work. |
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Re: Softly Spoken, Like A Whisper
(User Rating: 1 ) by mountainhigh on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:56:00 PM AEST (User
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Makes one want to be the traveler. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Softly Spoken, Like A Whisper
(User Rating: 1 ) by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:31:15 PM AEST (User
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Exquisite writing- I love this |
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