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Sound Asleep
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 07:35:10 AM in AEST
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Sound asleep
A blessed interval of serenity
The perfect remedy for the tired and displaced
Imagining that reality is surpassed by dreams
I am a child in a cradle again
Unconciously painting mosaics
of better worlds and realms
All my fears are doused and buried
if only for a while
Head upon the pillow
I want to lose myself
in this state forever
Sound asleep....
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by venkat on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 07:45:32 AM AEST
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Oh, sweet child..sleep soundly.
well written ..it is refreshing and peaceful.
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by Stewie_Griffin on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 08:32:57 AM AEST
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| If only things could be that way, even when we're awake....nicely done! |
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by Lone_er on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:30:20 AM AEST
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| how beautifully written and so very true...Enjoyed it very much....Russ |
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:24:06 AM AEST
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| Oh, the calm potrayed. The serenity fills me. Great poem. |
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:41:32 AM AEST
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beautiful. i feel like this almost every night lol!
good poem
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by shelby on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:28:40 PM AEST
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calming peaceful write if I could just get to sleep and stay there it would be heavenly!!
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:43:03 PM AEST
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It would be wonderful if our waking hours could be as calm and peaceful. There is nothing like a good restful nights sleep.
Rita |
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:35:48 PM AEST
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| reminds me a little of evanescance's imaginary, except it brings a vary peaceful feeling, makes me wanna take a nap lol |
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:41:42 AM AEST
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This is so sweet and sad. But isn't dreaming all that is left to find some happiness when you watch the news on the telly? Keep it up, this is really a flowing rhythm.
Hur |
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by Stitch on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:21:53 AM AEST
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Oh, I love this. Sleep, like time, is such a healer. You have captured that beautifully!
Stitch |
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by Baronhawk on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:57:43 PM AEST
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Ah sleep.....that genlte slumber... a quaint description of a marvelous thing herein. I envy you your refuge..you kind and gentle sleep. I have long ago lost my abitlity to sleep peacefully.. my sleeps are feverish and tortured sometimes by visions often by the inability to reach the restful REM sleep.. tossing and turning...
Anyway.. great work...and quaint topic. |
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:51:54 AM AEST
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wow, this is an great poem, i really like this..and so true too.
"in sleep i find solitude, no pain or distain..."
a line from one of my poems.
a great write, keep up the great work, luv n hugs, phil xxx |
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:44:24 PM AEST
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great escapism going to sleep, safer than getting drunk! an excellent write.
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by twinkletoes on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 01:43:32 AM AEST
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If only I could sleep...
tt |
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Re: Sound Asleep
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 01:52:38 AM AEST
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*yawns* (power of suggestion lol) i know i will sleep well tonight, this is just dreamy:) hugs n' love nessa
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