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Already dead
Contributed by
avis_nigra
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:47:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I hurt us again
~you? no - never!
I know better,
close your eyes - try not to see it
it does not matter
I have lost
~ me? no - never!
I know better, and it is not relieving
we die earlier than the moment
we cease breathing
I killed
~us? no - never!
I know better, it is true and sad
some who are still walking
are already dead
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Re: Already dead
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:52:25 AM AEST
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| hey like me :) |
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Re: Already dead
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 07:47:04 AM AEST
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| Nice. I liked the dialogue-between-two-people concept. Well done. |
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Re: Already dead
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:33:06 AM AEST
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I Like This .... Awesome Write
{{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}}
,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,, |
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Re: Already dead
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by poet_of_anger on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:53:44 AM AEST
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| Very well done, great work. |
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