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Makes You Weak
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Emptiness and sadness continue to consume
There are no windows in this darkened room
I'm wearing this white jacket, it holds me tight
They fear I won't make it through the night
Sorrow outlines my past and still remains
And never again will things be the same
Take these pills, only to fall asleep
Don't look back, your faith's too weak
This depression is something I can't beat
Love is poison that makes you weak.
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CuttersAngel
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2004-03-27 01:30:00]
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Re: Makes You Weak
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:54:33 AM AEST
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| hauntingly vivid, chillingly real, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Makes You Weak
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:58:47 AM AEST
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LOVE IS LETHAL,SO IS SUICIDE! AT LEAST LOVE YOU CAN CHANGE AFTER IT'S GONE WRONG!! BUT ONCE SUICIDE IS DONE THERE'S NO CHANGING IT!!! NICELY DONE & WELL WRITTEN!!!!
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Makes You Weak
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:23:21 AM AEST
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DEPRESSION SUCKS - ESPECIALYY SINCE I'M ALWAYS DEPRESSED
LOVE IS THE SEVENTH WAVE^^^^^^^ LET IT RULE-!!!!!!!!!LET LOVE RULE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Makes You Weak
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by silent on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:44:57 AM AEST
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Great depth in this, more than meets the eye..
Well done,
silent |
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Re: Makes You Weak
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:08:27 PM AEST
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Whoa what a truthful write!! Really bitter and dark and oh so true! Wonderfully written! Great write!
Anne :D |
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