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Tongue in Cheek
Contributed by
Claire
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:54:32 PM in AEST
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Why do so many wordsmiths take the time
To align thoughts into meter and rhyme?
Granted, deciding between enjambment
And end-stop lines one must never descent
to a level of messy disarray.
When detailing the dragons one must slay,
Synectoche beckons as a grand tool;
Imagery does imbue spirit in drool.
Diction reigns "King Device": I must mention
that words should recieve the most attention.
Emotions ought to unfurl unchecked by
an editor with a scrutinous eye.
When describing please do not take so much care,
That rhyme ruins the meaning that resonates there.
Copyright ©
Claire
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2004-03-26 23:54:32]
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Re: Tongue in Cheek
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:12:22 AM AEST
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| I don't worry about having alot of rhyming in my poetry. Great message here. I liked it. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Tongue in Cheek
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by angrycheerios on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:22:04 PM AEST
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| que marvilla :) |
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Re: Tongue in Cheek
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 11:39:57 PM AEST
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| nice point. but evryone has their own style, don't they. but your right. |
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Re: Tongue in Cheek
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by sbbn on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:06:18 AM AEST
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Very nice. It gets to the point of so much not-good poetry. I particularly enjoy the forced rhymes and odd line breaks. Also props for using the 14-line pentameter of the sonnet, and putting it in heroic couplets, not following the rhyme scheme.
If I am reading it right as sarcasm, this is a beautiful piece of work. |
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