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Those Damn Creatures
Contributed by
geoffreyalanbest
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:08:29 PM in AEST
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Those Damn Creatures
Those damn creatures with there horrid ways"
he screamed this out in dread
his legs were all broken and shattered
his face was blue and darken
his eyes were sunken from the light
he tried to walk but he could not
he tried to talk but he would not
he wanted to see but it was too hard
he wished he had just run away
he wished he had shown more modesty in the situation
he wished he had saw what those creatures were
his legs want limp
his face did no longer move
his eyes showed only his death
his last thought came to him in his last second
"Those damn creatures, why was I one among them"
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Re: Those Damn Creatures
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by neglected1 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:14:14 PM AEST
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excellent write... i like how you added such vivid imagination to it.. and a good theme... your wording arrangment is specially nice..
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Re: Those Damn Creatures
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by AspenGlow on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:48:23 AM AEST
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Vivid memories your words remind me of. I have said and felt those words. Thank you
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