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Another Side
Contributed by
Soulless
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:00:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I look in the mirror and see a face
I know this face is not my own
Hiding along borders of a darkened place
Where Reflections are the only world shown
Every night I almost convince myself
A hidden world luks the other side
Wondering eyes betray me
Staring through me
Seeing blindly
The lifeless remedy that I see
Dawn has found the sun again
The other world fades away
Maybe day will lose its way again
And they will come and play
My fingertips dance across the face reflected
Walls that stand between melt away
Deep down I believe to have seen the truth
I have fallen on the other side
Answers form where questions break away
Tonight I almost convinced myself
I have been lost on the other side
My wondering eyes betray me
Staring through me
Seeing blindly
The lifeless remedies that I see
Then I see
Faces play along the other side
My reflections drown in a pool of misery
Lost eyes stare back into me
I realize these eyes were never mine
Every night I almost convince myself
A hidden world luks the other side
Wondering eyes betray me
Staring through me
Seeing blindly
The lifeless remedy that I see
Now I see
Copyright ©
Soulless
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Re: Another Side
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by blueheart on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:02:46 PM AEST
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| Great write, there comes a time for all of us when we forget our identity. Wonderful. |
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Re: Another Side
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:10:42 PM AEST
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Hey...this reminds me alot of something from another author.....LMAO..ok ok Im just kidding, sorry. This was powerful and very well written. You are a welcome addition to this site my friend.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Another Side
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:32:14 PM AEST
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| vivid images, i enjoyed every line, i think ive had this same converstaion with myself in front of a mirror, this is really interesting, can be read and interrpretted several ways, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Another Side
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by silent on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:46:40 PM AEST
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So vivid, your writes really bring alot of memories back for me. Very subtle with so much power.
I loved this one,
Silent |
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Re: Another Side
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:15:33 PM AEST
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I Really Enjoyed Reading This.
Awesome,Beautiful,Wonderful Write.
Like I Said You Have That Special Talent
Keep Em Coming I Love Reading Your Poems.
Kisses And Hugs
,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,, |
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Re: Another Side
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by Stitch on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:32:12 PM AEST
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This is fascinating. I like the idea of the mirror and the dawn finding the sun again. Intriguing stuff.
Stitch |
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Re: Another Side
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by arden on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:18:32 PM AEST
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awesome! i loved this. really good and dark. nice work.
Arden |
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Re: Another Side
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:00:30 PM AEST
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i feel this way to! you are not alone...
this is very beautiful. i love it. |
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Re: Another Side
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:08:47 PM AEST
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well my dear friend. you may like my poetry but yours is just undescribily excellent. i've felt this way myself many times.
this is great keep it up
hugs
XgenX |
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