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Ridding the Pain
Contributed by
Soulless
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:07:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Staring throught the open doors
Upon a world of silent light
Reflecting me along its shores
Here it calls for me tonight
For this the night I can forget
Abandon everything I know
Sending my world crashing down
A perfect night to let go
Let the rain wash it all away
Let the snow bury down my past
It can not haunt me another day
Im free from the unknown meat last
Let the moon encircle the perfect stars
Let the sun shine down upon me
Showing through these once blind eyes
Now to uncross the world and see
Here I lay me down to sleep
Bringing new and let it seep
Upon the light the old give in
Taming down these harmful sins
Meeting up with all I've lost
Retrieving everything I gave
A new awakening shall be crossed
And lay the old to rest
Let the rain wash it all away
Let the snow bury down my past
It can not haunt me another day
Im free from the unknown meat last
Let the moon encircle the perfect stars
Let the sun shine down upon me
Showing through these once blind eyes
Now to uncross the world and see
Let the new rain
Bring me up again
Let the new snow
leave me not alone
Let the moon sway
To bring another day
Let the sunlight
Bring another night
Let me rise up fresh tonight
Bring back the beautious so bright
Letting past fade to light
Let me fall free tonight
~Soulless~
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Soulless
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2004-03-26 21:07:02]
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Re: Ridding the Pain
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by blueheart on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:23:42 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. :) |
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Re: Ridding the Pain
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by neglected1 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:18:37 PM AEST
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wonderfully writtin... its the best i have read in awhile.. i really like.. "Here I lay me down to sleep
Bringing new and let it seep
Upon the light the old give in
Taming down these harmful sins"
that really caught my eye.. but anyways excellent job
~neglected1~
seeking to continue insanity into the unknown (i can guarantee madness) -mjw
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Re: Ridding the Pain
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:28:02 PM AEST
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Excellent Totally Wonderful
I Like This..See I Knew You Hade That
Great Talent Of A Good Poem Writer.
Keep Em Coming As I Enjoy Reading Them Very Much.....
{ I Hope That Your A Male I'm Kissing Here LoL }
Kisses And Hugs
,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,, |
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Re: Ridding the Pain
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 08:30:45 AM AEST
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Beautiful!!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Ridding the Pain
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by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 06:38:04 PM AEST
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Whoa . . . I hate to be redundant, but that's just beautiful. Nicely, very nicely, done.
--Nora |
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