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invisible
Contributed by
spider
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 07:23:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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You gave me scars,
Left my skin bruised
And my flesh slashed.
My heart cold.
You left me,
Afraid and alone.
You took my faith
You stole my trust.
You bore into my head
That you were right,
And you were god.
And I am wrong ,
And I am nothing.
Only invisible.
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spider
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2004-03-26 19:23:28]
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Re: invisible
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by ADreamWithinADream on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 07:26:10 PM AEST
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| I have the same problem..but you are NOT nothing..your poetry is Beau-T-ful ...;) have a good day |
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Re: invisible
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by neglected1 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 07:28:49 PM AEST
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Dont let yourself fall down to anyones level.. you created your own special level for yourself.. the level that makes up the one and only you.. you have a beautiful heart.. and you are defanitly something.. your heat seems to bleed but most everything heals.. and by letting this out.. you have started
great job
~neglected1~ |
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Re: invisible
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:51:02 PM AEST
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| You know, you should not care too much about what other people think of you, most of the people can see others but can not see their own faults, you should just ignore people like that....hehehe, you must be thinking, 'yeah whatever, it is easy for you to say!' Oh well!(*shrug*)^_^ |
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