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What will it take
Contributed by
ADreamWithinADream
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 07:00:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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What will it take
For pity's sake
To make you see
Just how much you mean to me??
To feel your lips on mine
Would be OH so divine
Please my love, hear my cries
For when I see you my soul flies
And my heart sighs
You are SO beautiful and kind
With such a brilliant mind
Stay with me for a little while
OH GOD HOW I LOVE YOUR SMILE
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2004-03-26 19:00:11]
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Re: What will it take
(User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 07:04:06 PM AEST
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very sweet.. was very enjoyable to read from start to end.. you have really good word punches as well..
wonderful write
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Re: What will it take
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 07:59:05 PM AEST
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Wonderful Write
I Enjoyed Reading It.
Keep Up The Good Work.
,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,, |
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