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actress
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:46:01 PM in AEST
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So here I am on the stage again
Hanging here off the page again
Mask over mask
Absorbed in my task
I shout, I kiss, I stare
I hurt, I laugh, do you care?
No, of course not.
You are the audience,
cold and dark.
Scanning the floor
I pick out remarks:
So there she is on the stage again
Clinging there to her page again
Masks crack apart
As she fails at her task
Do we care as we stare
Whilst her heart stops
And starts?
No, we're the audience,
We don't know what to do
How do we react
When we ain't got a clue?
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dolly_dagger
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2004-03-26 17:46:01]
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Re: actress
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by shahan on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:57:24 PM AEST
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| beautifully written. reminded me of "Nana" by Emile Zola. |
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Re: actress
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:58:35 PM AEST
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thanks for sharing this experience with us.
it came out good. |
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Re: actress
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:34:24 AM AEST
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| all i can say is wow because you have conveyed that exactly how its felt. thanks for you comments on my stuff xx |
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Re: actress
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:13:35 PM AEST
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| hey ellie i love this poem especially 'hanging here off the page again'' its really interesting as are all ur poems! keep writing love lisa xx |
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Re: actress
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by Broken-glass on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:20:52 AM AEST
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| Interesting how you showed both perspectives xxxxxxx |
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