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explosion
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:29:10 PM in AEST
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I love you
But I can't know if your mind is occupied
In another life, with other minds
Parallel planes
So close, so secure, yet so out of reach.
But don't worry, I'll stifle my fear
With a blindfold
I'll heighten my sensible senses
and I'll be ecstatic again,
Highly reactive to a comforting electric
Touch
and nothing to distract.
Either way I'm gonna explode,
but i wanna love it
Like I love you
Copyright ©
dolly_dagger
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2004-03-26 17:29:10]
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Re: explosion
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by neglected1 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:36:19 PM AEST
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well written... straight to the point and a good sense of direction.. in the end you kind of gave it a twist witch i enjoyed... i enjoyed reading the whole thing ..
excellent job
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Re: explosion
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:39:37 PM AEST
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nicely done. love is blind, so it hurts.
but better to "live as a lion for a day than a life time as a lamb"-MOLOCO- said that.
peace out,
rhei76 |
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