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Wind Talker
Contributed by
shahan
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:22:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Night carries a hazy light,
Day steals the shine,
I live the baffled life,
A life truly mine.
I touch the beauty,
She swims like a bream.
In a reign of darkness,
Ardor touches shade of dream.
Dream… dream…dream…
Like kiss of drizzle in fire,
The reveries face the truth,
Burns in wing of desire.
Desire…desire…desire…
Why the soil so brown?
Earth smells like reaped corns,
And all my passions drown.
Drown…drown…drown…
I become an empty whole,
My soul dreams a wind.
A wind to blow me for.
Blow me a wind,
A wind to touch the shore,
Blow me the wind,
The wind to kill me for.
Copyright ©
shahan
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2004-03-26 17:22:39]
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Re: Wind Talker
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by neglected1 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:26:04 PM AEST
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very crisp and clean.. i liked how you repeated the words throught the 2,3,and 4th stanza's
wonderful piece
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Re: Wind Talker
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:50:17 PM AEST
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sadly spilt, like milk from a saucer. beautifully
constructed. I like it. |
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