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Mind poem
Contributed by
martynman1
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:38:19 PM in AEST
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i walk thou the corridors of your mind
placing poems as i walk
like a wind thats blows throu to every corner
of your mind
my poems will find there resting place
i am inside you now im glad im there
will u think of these poems hours or days from now
i hope so
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martynman1
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2004-03-26 16:38:19]
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Re: Mind poem
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by neglected1 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:46:56 PM AEST
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Short but to the point..
i believe this is your resting place
keep up the good work
~neglected1~ |
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Re: Mind poem
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by Kie on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:08:13 PM AEST
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| This was exquisite in my opinion. It was so dreamy and yet it really got me to thinking. It is like someone being inside of us when we keep those poems in our minds isn't it? I really liked the view you gave on this one. Well done. Kie |
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Re: Mind poem
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:24:50 PM AEST
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Would this be a Muse speaking?
The Celtic version of the poetic inspiration was a state of mind, called the awen. I'm sure we've all felt it.
Nice work. Keep it up!
Andrew |
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Re: Mind poem
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by shahan on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:37:14 PM AEST
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| this is indeed really nice. i think every poet bears the same idea in his/her mind. and we expect not only hours or days but also years and decades will fail to fade the emotion. |
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Re: Mind poem
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 06:46:06 PM AEST
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| this is so sweet, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Mind poem
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:27:46 AM AEST
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Awww How Sweet
Loved It ,Keep Em Coming
Great Write...
{{{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}}}
,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,, |
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