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The Calling
Contributed by
Hurretje
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:35:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I know you’re there
Somewhere, around me
Part of the shadows
Covered by the force of habit
You winked at me when I was young
In my dreams
From under my bed
You teased me with fear
Now it’s only a whisper
But it’s there
A stir in my slumbering
A sandgrain in my system
When I lie in bed at night
You mumble
Sultry chill
Through every hole and corner
When I’m kissed by the sun
Your shadow
Tickles me
And sends a shiver down my spine
In Amsterdam
Where everyone walks their way
You’re the one
That watches me
So stealthy
But I can see you drawing near
With the growing shadows at sunset
Behind the window
So sneaky
But I can hear you approaching
Through the ticking of the clock
Above my easy chair
As wisdom sprouts
To full growth
And serenity
Settles down
Your voice becomes clearer
Almost intelligible
As your caresses
Begin to unroot me
And your breath
Starts to crumple my leaves
You start to sing
Ever so softly
My whole life
Drenched with colors
Under a firmament of grey
Is displayed on flowered wallpaper
In my darkest hour
I reach out
As your rejoicing chime
Calls me home
Copyright ©
Hurretje
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2004-03-26 16:35:35]
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Re: The Calling
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by neglected1 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:40:51 PM AEST
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Well done... great theme as well..
keep up the good work!!
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Re: The Calling
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by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:22:15 PM AEST
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I love this poem. It sends such a discriptive picture. Keep it up.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: The Calling
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by venkat on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:33:07 AM AEST
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| very sweet..beautiful description..lovely poem venkat |
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Re: The Calling
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:18:46 AM AEST
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Very Beautiful Descriptive Picture Hun
Very Wonderful Write...
Loved It....God Your Good At Writing
LoL Wish I Was....
Hugs N' Kisses
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: The Calling
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by Necromant on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:35:57 PM AEST
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Wow another amazing poem! The last stanza gave me chills! Great write!!
Anne :D |
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Re: The Calling
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:36:03 PM AEST
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| wow... i can relate to this in a weird chilling way.... |
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Re: The Calling
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by arden on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:01:09 PM AEST
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i love this. you have such a way with words i wish i could write like this. so awesome. great write.
Arden |
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