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Alone
Contributed by
pwei
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:16:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am the man who lives in the past,
I have achieved, I’ve had a blast,
But I would like not to quite have finished
My flame though lit is now diminished.
I am the man who drinks in cafes
Writing what I see in alleyways.
I would like to know a lot more beside
My body belies me I’m a fertile mind.
I walk in slow motion through the town,
Where once I laughed and played the clown,
The wall where I had my first romancing,
I shed a tear where I used to go dancing.
I reach a canal bridge and hum a tune,
By The Waterboys, “The Whole Of The Moon”.
It seems so apt, my eyes wide open,
All those emotions left unspoken.
I am the man who remembers the sun,
Those summer evenings full of fun.
So far away, so long ago,
Its just not right I feel so low.
I go back home through the rain,
Washing away some of the pain.
And call a friend but she’s not home
I am the man who lives alone….
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pwei
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2004-03-26 16:16:22]
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Re: Alone
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by neglected1 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:51:31 PM AEST
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Exceptionally well written.. I just hope that your not the one who lives alone.. you have great inner strength and a amazingly great talent..
keep up the excellent work
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Re: Alone
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by Justalady on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:52:58 PM AEST
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But .... as the song say's.... You did it your way.
Regrets there may be a few . Very emotional to read as other's can relate to "Alone"
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