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I planted the tree Zasadila jsem strom
Contributed by
Aika
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:14:47 PM in AEST
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I planted the tree
And watched it grow
bloomes smelled lovely
sweet fruits rumoured
pieces of many colours
and tongue longing
which one my hand touches
I want to eat
My heart was telling
Don´t eat this piece
But brain was sure
I´m that one who this needs
When for the first time
Body was in cramps
Heart was crying
But brain was silent
So where to find now
The medicine to be saved
Why does not tell my heart
Has it some secret?
With hand shaking
Touching another piece
Will I be suffering
Or heal my body?
„no“,told me my heart
„It´s not the colour
Nor what these look like,
I recognize the danger
I tell you in time
Just listen to me
Don´t rely upon brain
My voice is here“
I obey my heart
Even if time to time
My body is in cramps
That´s price of life
Much less fruits
My tree is now giving
But much better tastes
The real knowledge
Zasadila jsem strom
A radovala se, že roste
Květy voněly nádherně,
zvěst sladkého ovoce
plody různých barev
a jazýček mlsný,
na který ruka sáhne,
ten v mých ústech skončí
srdce mi radilo,
tenhle kus nechutnej,
však rozumu cos velilo
já jsem ten hladovej
poprvé se tělo
svíjelo v křečích
srdce plakalo
ale rozum se utišil
tak kde ten lék,kde
mám teď já najít
proč mlčí srdce
snad mi něco tají?
rukou roztřesenou teď
Sahám pro další plod
Budu zas trpět
Nebo uzdravím tělo?
srdce řeklo:“ ne,
barvou to není
i pohled tě zklame
já vím o nebezpečí
řeknu ti včas,
jen poslouchej
slyš můj hlas
na rozum nedej“
poslouchám, co mi říká
i když chvílemi
bolestí se svírám
tak bolí ponaučení
mnohem méně ovoce
můj strom teď plodí
však o to lepší je
chuť zdravého poznání
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-03-26 16:14:47]
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Re: I planted the tree Zasadila jsem strom
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 06:16:02 PM AEST
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very pretty, as are all your poems alena, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I planted the tree Zasadila jsem strom
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:39:38 AM AEST
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Aika, this is beautiful,
Our hearts can be treacherous, or they can be our guide.
Think with you mind, never lead with your heart......for our desires, our mind will tell us which is right or which is wrong...
This was a very thought provoking poem, Aika....very deep, and I enjoyed it very much.
Love you
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Re: I planted the tree Zasadila jsem strom
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:22:31 AM AEST
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| nice just nice |
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Re: I planted the tree Zasadila jsem strom
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:46:19 PM AEST
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| It's always worth taking a chance- even if the outcome almost kills you. VERY nicely written! |
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Re: I planted the tree Zasadila jsem strom
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:45:58 AM AEST
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To taste the pleasant fruit is wonderful, yet sometimes in order to know what is good we have to taste the unpleasant and bad.
A lesson we all learn in life
steve
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