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Love what a beautiful thing!
Contributed by
Necromant
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:56:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Love, love, love, ah Love… what an inspiring word!,
It’s an artwork, a tempting music, a warm ardent flame,
Its our driving force in this cruel and desolated world!,
It’s a sin to put such a pure thing in our hand, but who am I to blame?
Love is flawless and eternal, it is the only absolute reason,
Love gives and never takes, feel it and you’ll live like a king,
It’s as sweet as sugar cane, and it doesn’t understand treason,
Taste it and you’ll spend all your days birdlike, just fly and sing!
What is that on the news? People dying with excessive intake of sugar?
Psychosis and depression? Were they deaf to the music? I wonder…
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Necromant
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:19:03 PM AEST
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| yeah and it has bite, i hear you, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by Kie on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:40:35 PM AEST
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| Yeah love is beautiful when its beautiful and when its not it sucks! I liked this one alot... Kie |
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 08:28:18 PM AEST
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love is like a pretty bird soaring in the sky,
but if you arent careful, it will s... right in your eye.
and thats all I have to say about that :oP
Very well done :o)
Roses
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by venkat on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 07:17:33 AM AEST
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Oh..great girl..this is amazingly beautiful.I'm
taking care not to consume more sugar..and I hear a lot of music also..oh..I love this. venkat |
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:14:41 AM AEST
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I liked this alot...you have a wonderful writing style...keep up the great work!
faith |
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:15:10 PM AEST
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this is powerful, yet very beautiful. it is a brillant piece. so much description yet so simple. thanks for your comment on 'untitled'
XgenX
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by arden on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:34:26 PM AEST
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ohh i like this one. its really awesome! wonderfully written. great job by a great writer.
Arden |
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:00:09 AM AEST
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Very good work, my friend.
luv, huggs,
emy
Thanks for your comments on my work. |
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 09:20:45 AM AEST
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i love a bit of sarcasm me! a very well written piece well done i'm off to read about your cat!
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:10:57 PM AEST
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AwwwwwwAnne, I finally found you! I've been looking under "Anne" Dumb me! Then when you commented on my poem just a minute ago, I said, "Yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
now I can find her.....
Thank you dear for all your wonderful comments always!
And I really liked this poem, how different, how creative, how unique. I've tried sacrasim before, but it came in the front and left out the back door......nothing inbetween, you did quite well here, I enjoyed your write!
Atleast I could tell.......with mine, it dropped in the well *smiles*
Love,
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:46:53 AM AEST
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Keep on chasing hypocrisy! Great job!
Hur |
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by Baronhawk on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:40:12 PM AEST
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As sarcastic a you may...I do agree...love that flighty lady...that cruel yet beautiful parody. But truly love is indeed a beautiful thing...stop and think.. what is the poetry most prevelant..most divinely beautiful and prosaic.. are they not those of love?? Even I the master of dark despair ofts write of love...and my despair is in part caused by love...ohh Love what a beautiful thing indeed.
Nice write!... I love sarcasm..ha ha haa |
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:54:08 AM AEST
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| sometimes i wonder if thats our purpose in love is just to find true love.... then i realize its more than that.... but many of us that is the ultimate goal in life to get married have a family and live happily ever after..... |
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:24:40 AM AEST
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WICKED BUT WISE AS TO NO SURPRISE!
DAN!! |
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Re: Love what a beautiful thing!
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:48:33 AM AEST
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| Lol, to sum it up, love is deceptive. Nice write. |
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